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“rural transferring employees” 可改为 “rural migrant workers” 更符合英语习惯表达。
“carried through pairing-up moves” 中 “carried through” 不太准确，可以用 “carried out”。
“offers new impetus for” 中 “impetus” 一般与 “to” 搭配，改为 “offers new impetus to”。
“a 1.1 percentage rising” 应改为 “a 1.1-percentage-point increase” 更准确表达百分点的增长。
“to sustainably upgrade housekeepers’ skill is necessary so as to improve related staffs’ vocational ability and their service quality” 句子结构有些臃肿，可以改为 “It is necessary to upgrade housekeepers' skills sustainably to improve the vocational abilities of related staff and the quality of service.”
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