同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《2023年11月CATTI笔译二级【韩刚签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
第一段：
“To develop new quality production force is the necessary demand for scrambling the opportunity of the new round sci-tech revolution and industrial transformation.” 中，“scrambling” 应改为 “seizing” 或 “grasping”，“scramble” 通常表示 “争夺、抢夺”，不太符合此处表达 “抓住机遇” 的语境。
“Currently, the new round sci-tech revolution and industrial transform are pressing ahead in-depth” 中，“transform” 应改为 “transformation”。
“Against this background, the international competition for grabbing sci-tech hub and emerging industries becomes fierce that we have never seen before.” 中，“becomes fierce that we have never seen before” 表述有误，可改为 “becomes fiercer than ever before”
“Growingly, the international competition showcases productivity upgrade and how to build a related relationship to adapt it.” 中，“adapt it” 应改为 “adapt to it”。
第二段：
“The issues show a deeper aging population, growing confine in resource and environment endowment, shrinking competitive advantages of lower cost and a non-sustainability traditional developing model by massive resource and energy input.” 中，“confine” 应改为 “constraint”；“non-sustainability” 应改为 “unsustainable”；“by massive resource and energy input” 应改为 “with massive resource and energy input”。
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