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“Despite of different paths and various thoughts we embrace, we could eventually reach our agreement.” 中，“Despite” 后不能加 “of”，应改为 “Despite different paths and various thoughts we embrace, we could eventually reach our agreement.”。
“To ensure that anti-terrorism is enforced in law-based trajectory represents the consensus of the current international community.” 这句话缺少连接词，可改为 “To ensure that anti-terrorism is enforced in law-based trajectory is what represents the consensus of the current international community.” 或者 “Ensuring that anti-terrorism is enforced in law-based trajectory represents the consensus of the current international community.”。
“Therefore the rule of law practice wouldn’t be uniform through anywhere.” 中，“through anywhere” 表述不恰当，可改为 “Therefore, the rule of law practice cannot be completely uniform everywhere.”。
“Thereby it could both effectively protect and punish terroristic acts and fully respect and ensure human right, conforming to its concrete reality and international general practice and achieving sound effect.” 中，“human right” 应为 “human rights”；
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